Promote Improving the Drupal authoring experience to Featured

Before you promote this case study to Featured, I hope you will do some further copy editing. Maybe consult with the Mass.gov editors, who work hard to keep the information on their site easy to digest.

Start with the lead paragraph, especially the lead sentence. It is way to complex. How about something like this?

The Commonwealth of Massachusetts embarked on a large-scale web replatform with several goals:

• Modernize the web site
• Make it easier to continuously improve the site
• Engage online with constituents
• Provide services
• Provide a "single face of government" as much as possible

Mass.gov® has become an essential tool, enabling the Commonwealth to serve its constituents. It delivers information and critical day-to-day social services to the Commonwealth’s 6.8 million people. With 15 million page views each month, the Mass.gov platform hosts over 400 government agencies. It provides content to support anyone who wants to move, visit, or do business in the state. All of this is fueled by the Commonwealth’s 600+ content authors. They have been able to use the platform to improve constituent satisfaction, making a noticeable positive difference on how the public sees their organization and the services they provide.

(What does it mean to "become an essential platform in ..."?)

Note that I removed the "+", since "over 400+" is redundant.

I think that "Wicked awesome content" is a cute slogan, but the other phrase, "constituent centric", describes this section better.

I guess it is intended as a segue, but I think the paragraph "Last Call Media and the MassGovDigital teams worked together ..." makes more sense as the beginning of the next section rather than leading up to it.

I see one screenshot near the top of the page and two near the bottom. On a case study page, can these be inserted in line? I would love to see these mixed in with the first three paragraphs of "Improving the Drupal authoring experience".

The heading "New welcome page experience for authors" looks as though it is missing its content.

This is great and looks good. I'm a bit worried to have many mass.gov case studies featured at the same time, but now the performance one has been featured for a while and maybe we could switch that one out for this one, because some of the info are the same and looks like a repetition? Just an idea.

I also have a couple of questions after reading this:
* Would it be possible to add a video where UI can be shown better?
* Was any of this work contributed back to Drupal, i.e. the theme?

If you agree with replacing this with the Performance featured case study on the slider, i would be happy to recommend this as I think this is excellent work :)

I agree with Sonja. Perhaps the two case study texts can be combined, highlighting both the authoring experience as well as performance improvement in a single case study?

I am closing old requests which didn't get a positive review more than a year after they have been created.