[META] Finalise the wording of the messages in installer, toolbar and on the status report page [#2938189]

created from https://www.drupal.org/project/drupal/issues/2809635#comment-12433583

I think the title explains this.

We need to refine the message presented to users on

The install screen
The toolbar (permanent message)
The status page

Comment	File	Size	Author
#9	status-report-after.png	35.76 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	status-report-error-before.png	45.23 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	status-report-regular-before.png	35.34 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	install-screen-after.png	34.46 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	install-screen-before.png	42.39 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	toolbar-after.png	15 KB	David_Rothstein
#9	toolbar-before.png	15.18 KB	David_Rothstein

Comments

Comment #1

19 January 2018 at 23:15

markconroy created an issue. See original summary.

Comment #2

markconroy commented 19 January 2018 at 23:18

Priority:

Normal

» Major

since this is a beta blocker, updating to major

Comment #3

markconroy commented 19 January 2018 at 23:21

Issue tags:

+Umami beta blocker

Comment #4

markconroy commented 19 January 2018 at 23:21

Issue tags:

+Out of the Box Initiative

Comment #5

markconroy commented 20 January 2018 at 16:58

Title:

- Finetune the wording of the messages in installer, toolbar and on the status report page

» Finetune the wording of the messages in installer, toolbar and on the status report page

Comment #6

andrewmacpherson commented 22 January 2018 at 17:51

Comment #7

markconroy commented 23 January 2018 at 09:33

Title:

Finetune the wording of the messages in installer, toolbar and on the status report page

» [META] Finalise the wording of the messages in installer, toolbar and on the status report page

Comment #8

markconroy commented 23 January 2018 at 09:43

Comment #9

David_Rothstein commented 23 January 2018 at 17:49

Status	File	Size
new	toolbar-before.png	15.18 KB
new	toolbar-after.png	15 KB
new	install-screen-before.png	42.39 KB
new	install-screen-after.png	34.46 KB
new	status-report-regular-before.png	35.34 KB
new	status-report-error-before.png	45.23 KB
new	status-report-after.png	35.76 KB

I am not sure how to navigate the various sub-issues, but to kick off discussion I'm posting some patches on a few of them. Since the text in the various places is related to each other, I'm posting screenshots here for review as a group:

The toolbar
#2938800: Finalize wording for Toolbar warning message
Before it looked like this:

After it looks like this:

No big changes really, just tried to soften the text a bit. (Note: That issue seems to be about the design in addition to the wording? Or was there supposed to be a different issue for the toolbar wording, separate from the toolbar design?...)

Big issue: Clicking on this message still takes you to https://www.drupal.org/project/drupal/issues/2829101 - that doesn't make sense. Still needs work to figure out a good page to link to.
The install page
#2938803: Remove the warning about the Umami profile on the install screen
Before it looked like this:

After it looks like this:

This includes suggestions from #2822414-46: Redesign the 'install profile selection' installer screen to allow for experimental profiles and more information with a few additional refinements. Note that for the "warning" text, I deliberately made it roughly the same as the toolbar text above.
The status report
#2938805: Finalise the wording of the warning message on the status report page
The "before" behavior actually has a couple variations.

Regular:

If you've updated to a new version of Drupal core after installing the profile:

I do not really see a point in the latter, especially not in making it an "error" condition and the vague reference to "issues with this site". Updating to a new version of Drupal core just means that your demo site does not match what the latest-and-greatest demo site would be (if you were to reinstall from scratch) but that is not an error condition. I can see some logic for an informational message there (rather than an error), but for now, I removed it.

Therefore, after the patch it looks like this:

Note that I tried to make the wording/design of the "experimental profiles" section more closely match the one for "experimental modules".

Obviously, the screenshots also show that there is still a (preexisting) bug here with the HTML in the profile name being printed as escaped HTML on the status report...