After reviewing the DrupalCon Code of Conduct in issue https://www.drupal.org/project/drupalcon_coc/issues/3079862 I found some grammar nitpicks.

  • not feel able to work out a => not feel able to work out a (extra spaces between the words feel and able)
  • seek advice of a third => seek the advice of a third (add article)
  • foster our members wellness => foster our members' wellness
  • members behavior and responsibilities => members' behavior and responsibilities
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#4 drupalcon_coc-readme-grammar-add_caste-3105467-3.patch6.08 KBvolkswagenchick
#3 drupalcon_coc-readme-grammar-3105467-2.patch2.53 KBvolkswagenchick

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new drupalcon_coc-readme-grammar-3105467-2.patch2.53 KB

Here is a patch that fixes grammar in the existing text.

I will also attach a patch that fixes the grammar and adds the word caste to the protected groups n the next comment thanks!

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new drupalcon_coc-readme-grammar-add_caste-3105467-3.patch6.08 KB

Attached is a patch that corrects grammar and adds caste.
Thanks

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Removing the patch related to adding caste as it is outside the scope of this issue (but is inside the scope of another issue).

Reviews welcome on the grammar patch only, please.

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Status: Needs review » Reviewed & tested by the community

The changes proposed in #3 seem good. Marking RTBC

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Status: Reviewed & tested by the community » Fixed

Thanks for this one - committed!

Status: Fixed » Closed (fixed)

Automatically closed - issue fixed for 2 weeks with no activity.