Closed (fixed)
Project:
Drupal core
Version:
8.0.x-dev
Component:
documentation
Priority:
Normal
Category:
Task
Assigned:
Unassigned
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Created:
27 Apr 2015 at 19:56 UTC
Updated:
29 May 2015 at 16:44 UTC
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Comment #2
xjmOops. Now without nonsense hunks from another interdiff.
Comment #3
jhodgdonLooks good!
Nitpick: list formatting. We normally end list items in . not , and do not put "or" in them as in this patch.
So I would suggest the line before the list say "... unless one of the following is true:", and then take out the , and or stuff.
Also each list item normally starts with a capital letter.
Comment #4
jacobsanfordChanges requested in #3 implemented.
I also removed the word 'just' from the first list item - it seemed redundant.
Comment #5
jhodgdonThanks, that looks fine to me.
Comment #6
alexpottCommitted 5a54339 and pushed to 8.0.x. Thanks!