Problem/Motivation

The Easy out of the box initiative team would like a presentation slide deck for contributors/mentor to use before contribution days to encourage contribution attendance.

Proposed resolution

Create Marketing Materials for the EOOTB initiative - Presentation Slide Deck

UPDATED: Slides deck can be found here: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1WW2s-U4j3FWxeKN89oKOZKKqXOjo2LlT...

Remaining tasks

  • Ideas submitted
  • Slide pattern created
  • Slide created and reviewed

Slide review tasks

  • Formatting
  • Grammar
  • Flow
  • Spelling
  • Brand consistency
  • Alt Text on images (right-click on image and select alt text)
  • Links (make sure they navigate to the right place)
  • Accessibility
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jessicalaila created an issue. See original summary.

jessicalaila’s picture

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volkswagenchick’s picture

I would love to help on this, but don't have the capacity to lead.

volkswagenchick’s picture

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Status: Active » Needs review

Updated summary to include link to presentation deck.

Moving this into needs review.

volkswagenchick’s picture

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updated summary with list of review tasks.

Shefali Shetty’s picture

We also need inputs for slides 10 (Challenges), 17 (How can you help) and 19 (Case studies) please. Thanks!

volkswagenchick’s picture

Status: Needs review » Needs work

Thanks this looks good. I have some comments.

Questions:

  • What are the three horizontal lines in the top right corner of slides 1 & 3 ?

Room for improvement:

  • Inconsistent use of punctuation across bullet points (some bullets have periods, where others do not in the same group)
  • Inconsistent capitalization on titles
  • Non-technical vs Non technical - inconsistent formatting
  • Slide 12 vs slide 16 - formatting the "work in progress" sections - one has it bold, the other does not
  • Slide 18 - "Amy June" should read "AmyJune"
  • Slide 18 - "Emilie Nouveau (D.O - DyanneNova)" vs "Emilie Nouveau - DyanneNova" - Might be cleaner to remove parathesis

Concerns:

  • “Beginner” and “Non-technical” phrases - are they reductive? I especially don't like the use of "Non-technical"...remember just because folks are not coders, does not make them "non-techinical" . Solution?? Maybe the word "Novice"
  • "What problems does it help solve?" maybe instead "What solutions does this provide".. adds a more positive twist.
  • Slide 7 - Will everyone understand the phrase "right off the bat"?
Shefali Shetty’s picture

Status: Needs work » Needs review

Thanks for the inputs! Incorporated all your suggestions. About the first question - What are the three horizontal lines in the top right corner of slides 1 & 3 ? - will get back on this. Meanwhile, please let me know if you think that's a distraction.
We still need inputs for slides 10,17 and 19 please. It would be great if anyone from the team could help. Thanks!

rgladden’s picture

Hi Shefali, I went to take a look at 10, 17, and 19 but there are only 16 slides in the deck- can you update which slides you need reviewing?

Thanks :)
Rosie.

Shefali Shetty’s picture

Hi Rosie,

Sorry about that confusion! We updated the slide-deck since then a bit. We would now need inputs for slides 14 (How can you help) and 16 (Case studies).

Thanks!
Shefali

Shefali Shetty’s picture

We also would love to have an overall review and feedback on it please :)

volkswagenchick’s picture

Wonderful, thanks for those edits.

I have some comments:

  • Between bullet points maybe add some space - that will break up the content for better a11y and readability
  • Slide 9 - the content goes to the bottom and maybe cut off depending on projection or covered by closed captioning
Shefali Shetty’s picture

Thanks, Amyjune! The updates have been made. The marketing team is moving on to work with creating slide-decks for other initiatives as well. It would be nice if the team could finalize on this one. Also, having some case studies to show usage of Media/Claro/Layout Builder, would be great!

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I would make it 1.15 spaced and add a space before list item
Attached two files for clarity

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Ashirwad Shetty’s picture

Status: Needs work » Needs review
Shefali Shetty’s picture

Done. Please review

volkswagenchick’s picture

Slides 7, 15, and 17 could use space between the bullets.

Looks great! Thanks for all the efforts here!

Shefali Shetty’s picture

Done! Thanks!

volkswagenchick’s picture

Status: Needs review » Reviewed & tested by the community

Great - I am going to move this to RTBC and we can ask for stakeholder buyin in the next meeting.