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jhodgdon’s picture

Status: Active » Needs review
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Here's the patch.

jhodgdon’s picture

Issue tags: +d7help

Forgot the tag again.

batigolix’s picture

looks pretty good

heather’s picture

Ignore this!

I made a mistake. Images aren't all correct. See 2 comments below.

heather’s picture

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Screenshot of Toolbar help recommendations.

heather’s picture

Check this patch

Screenshots:

Poll before:

pollhelp-before.png

After 637710.patch

pollhelp-patch.png

I have made some revisions to make it shorter and more clear. Trying to avoid using the word itself to define the term, e.g., A poll is a poll, where possible.

poll-recommendation.png

Toolbar

After 637710.patch (No help existed before. )

toolbar-patch.png

Recommendation, I suggest a small change to avoid A toolbar is a toolbar, etc.

toolbar-recommendation.png

Dashboard

After 637710.patch (No help existed before.)

Looks good, no recommendations.
dashboard.png

jhodgdon’s picture

Status: Needs review » Reviewed & tested by the community

I like the latest version, and I think we've had two other reviewers now, so let's mark this RTBC.

arianek’s picture

Status: Reviewed & tested by the community » Needs work

just gonna make a couple small format changes for consistency with the others that've been committed already. will post new patches and RTBC shortly.

arianek’s picture

Status: Needs work » Needs review
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So... reviewing this, it seemed like a lot was still lacking in the Dashboard help. I added a bunch more info there, and tweaked the Poll help formatting for consistency with what has been committed. I didn't really have anything to add to Toolbar cept a capitalization. New patch/screenshots attached.

codi’s picture

Reviewed arianek's patch. Looked good save for a missed space here and a missing 'the'. Other than that it's ready to go.

arianek’s picture

hey codi - be sure to do a cvs up -dPC after each patch you apply and test to reset the codebase - there was some stuff included in the patch that was for another module. ;-)

other than that, the only change i made was to this poll text, output now reads:

<dt>Viewing polls</dt>
<dd>You can visit the <a href="/poll">Polls</a> page to view all current polls, or alternately enable the <em>Most recent poll</em> block on the <a href="/admin/structure/block">Blocks administration page</a>. To vote in, or view the results of a specific poll, you can click on the poll itself.</dd>

i think this needs one final review to make sure i didn't mess up removing that extraneous code, but otherwise good to go!

jhodgdon’s picture

Status: Needs review » Needs work

The current standard http://drupal.org/node/632280 says that the first sentence in the About section should have the module name uncapitalized. If we are changing the standard, we need to agree on it first. The UX folks agreed with the current standard on that page, by the way, so if you want to capitalize the module name, please talk to them first.

Of the four patches that have been committed to date, two comply with the standard in http://drupal.org/node/632280 and two don't.

One other thing: that last patch contains a patch for the update module as well. That is being done on another issue. Please be careful when creating patches that you only include the changes you intended for the current issue... thanks!

arianek’s picture

Status: Needs work » Reviewed & tested by the community

i don't see anything from update module in the latest patch (i stripped it out from the previous one) - and the caps is a go, so RTBC ahoy.

webchick’s picture

Title: Help file fixup: poll, dashboard, and toolbar » Help file fixup: poll and dashboard
Status: Reviewed & tested by the community » Fixed

Poll and Dashboard look good. I committed those to HEAD. Thanks!

However, the Toolbar hunks still needs some work. The help text there implies a coupling between Toolbar and Shortcut that does not exist. Toolbar actually works just fine on its own, and the shortcuts only appear if Shortcut module is enabled.

However, due to how closely related they are, it probably makes sense to tackle both of these at once, so I'm marking this issue as fixed, but re-titling the Shortcut issue to both Toolbar/Shortcut so we can discuss them both in one place at #636822: Help File Fixup: shortcut and toolbar.

Status: Fixed » Closed (fixed)
Issue tags: -d7help

Automatically closed -- issue fixed for 2 weeks with no activity.