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The description for #markup contains the following sentence. (Emphasis is mine.)

Aternatively, you can use the render array key #allowed_tags to alter which tags are filtered.

It should be Alternatively.

Also, let's fix this sentence. (I added the <code> tags for showing the code here.)

(I.e, <script> and <style> are not allowed.)

I.e should eventually be I.e., but I would rather use For example, since the list of filtered tags is probably not exhaustive.

(For example, @code <script> @endcode and @code <style> @endcode are not allowed.)

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#18 interdiff.txt1.13 KBpguillard
#18 improve-documentation-2781927-18.patch3.82 KBpguillard
#13 improve-documentation-2781927-13.patch3.57 KBEda
#11 improve-documentation-2781927-11.patch3.54 KBapaderno
#9 fix-a-typo-2781927-9.patch1.48 KBapaderno
#7 fix-a-typo-2781927-7.patch1.5 KBapaderno
#4 fix_code_example_in-2776779-2.patch545 bytespguillard
#4 typo_documentation-2781927-2.patch1.15 KBpguillard
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kiamlaluno created an issue. See original summary.

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Title: Fix a typo in the documentation » Fix a typo in theme.api.php
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Both typos fixed. For the second one, we had #2637336: Replace i.e. and e.g. with English words in /core/includes and /core/misc directory, still in standby

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Oops, I guess we posted same response at the same time..

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The last submitted patch, 4: fix_code_example_in-2776779-2.patch, failed testing.

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I have also fixed a too verbose sentence, other than fixing a line overflow in my previous patch. The previous one also fixed a missing indeterminate article.

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+++ b/core/lib/Drupal/Core/Render/theme.api.php
@@ -277,12 +277,12 @@
+ *   implement a theme hook and a template file and/or an asset library.

Also, since in Drupal 8 there are just theme hooks using template files, this phrase can be shortened to "implement a theme hook and/or an asset library."

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Title: Fix a typo in theme.api.php » Improve description of render array properties and examples
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improve-documentation-2781927-11.patch3.54 KB

Let's make it more generic, since there isn't just a typo to correct; there is also the punctuation to correct, and some sentences to make more coincise. Also, the example shows how to allow a tag that is already whitelisted; it should show how to allow a tag that is otherwise filtered out.

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+ * type of "render element" (for example 'form', for an HTML form; 'textfield',

Needs a comma after "(for example...", like:

* type of "render element" (for example, 'form', for an HTML form; 'textfield',

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Fix the comma and remove the word "three" as there were more properties listed, not 3.

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The patch #13 is working fine.

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The last submitted patch, 13: improve-documentation-2781927-13.patch, failed testing.

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+++ b/core/lib/Drupal/Core/Render/theme.api.php
@@ -254,11 +254,11 @@
+ *   type of "render element" (for example, 'form', for an HTML form; 'textfield',

Line length exceeds 80 characters.

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interdiff.txt1.13 KB

Corrected, thanks

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Cool, passed, in which case, all looks good so have a RTBC.

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This is an improvement and nothing is wrong with any of the changes. Also as a docs fix this can be backported to 8.2.x.

Committed and pushed aa03660 to 8.3.x and 1656c67 to 8.2.x. Thanks!

  • alexpott committed aa03660 on 8.3.x 
    Issue #2781927 by pguillard, kiamlaluno, Eda, kiwimind: Improve...

  • alexpott committed 1656c67 on 8.2.x 
    Issue #2781927 by pguillard, kiamlaluno, Eda, kiwimind: Improve...

Status: Fixed » Closed (fixed)

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