diff --git a/source/en/install-dev-sites.txt b/source/en/install-dev-sites.txt
index 408fb04..968e101 100644
--- a/source/en/install-dev-sites.txt
+++ b/source/en/install-dev-sites.txt
@@ -16,22 +16,17 @@ Development Sites are different copies of the same site used for
 developing, updating, and testing a site without risking the integrity of the
 live site.
 
-When building your site, your deployment workflow will usually include one
-or more sites for developing and testing new features before going live
-(development and staging sites) and a production site that you only update when
-the new features you developed have proved to be safe to go live.
-
-An example workflow:
+An example deployment workflow for site building will usually include the sites mentioned below:
 
 * **Local environment**: The development process starts with developers working
-on new features, bug fixes, theming, configuration, etc. in their local
+on new features, bug fixes, theming and configuration in their local
 environment.
 
 * **Development site**: Developers push the changes they've been working on to
 the development site. For a team of more than one developer, version control
 is usually used. Git is a version control system that tracks your files for
 any changes. You can then commit those changes to a repository. Using Git
-allows team members to work on the same site without overriding each others'
+allows team members to work on the same site without overriding each other's
 work. It also makes it possible to easily roll back to previous stages of the
 development.
 
@@ -41,11 +36,11 @@ Acceptance Testing) are most often carried out on the staging site. It is
 recommended to have live content on both the development and staging sites, so
 that you can test how the new features will work with the existing content.
 
-* **Production site**: The live site on the web available to visitors.
+* **Production site**: The live site on the web available to visitors. It contains new features that have been proven safe to go live.        
 
 Based on the project's size, scope, requirements, or stakeholders, stages from
 the above workflow can be removed, or additional stages can be added. For
-example a testing site before staging can be added to separate testing and user
+example, a testing site before staging can be added to separate testing and user
 acceptance processes.
 
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