Index: modules/openid/openid.module
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RCS file: /cvs/drupal/drupal/modules/openid/openid.module,v
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -p -r1.5 openid.module
--- modules/openid/openid.module	12 Sep 2007 11:32:06 -0000	1.5
+++ modules/openid/openid.module	22 Sep 2007 13:38:19 -0000
@@ -42,11 +42,15 @@ function openid_menu() {
 function openid_help($path, $arg) {
   switch ($path) {
     case 'user/%/openid':
-      return t('You may login to this site using an OpenID. You may add your OpenId URLs below, and also see a list of any OpenIDs which have already been added.');
-    case 'admin/help#openid':
-      $output = '<p>'. t('OpenID is a secure way to use one user ID and password to log in to many web sites without special software, giving the same password to each site, or losing control over which information is shared with each site that you visit.') .'</p>';
-      $output .= '<p>'. t('Users can create accounts using their OpenID, assign one or more OpenIDs to an existing account, and log in using an OpenID. This lowers the barrier to registration, which is good for the site, and offers convenience and security to the users. Logging in via OpenID is far more secure than cross-site logins using drupal.module.') .'</p>';
-      $output .= '<p>'. t('More information on OpenID is available at <a href="@url">OpenID.net</a>', array('@url' => url('http://openid.net'))) .'</p>';
+      $output = '<p>'. t('This site supports <a href="@url">OpenID</a>, a secure way to log into many websites using the same username and password.  An OpenID identity is an account  on an OpenID server.  By verifying that you are logged into your OpenID server, this site will know that you are who you claim to be.', array('@url' => url('http://openid.net'))).'<p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('If you have an OpenID, enter the URL to your OpenID server below.  When next you login, you will be able to use the username and login from your OpenID identity on this site.  You can have multiple OpenID servers if you like, just keep adding them here.').'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>' . t('If you do not have an OpenID and would like one, look into one of the <a href="@url">free public providers</a>.  You can find out more about OpenID at their <a href="@url2">website</a>', array('@url' => url('http://openid.net/wiki/index.php/OpenIDServers'), '@url2' => url('http://openid.net'))).'</p>';
+      return $output;
+   case 'admin/help#openid':
+      $output = '<p>'. t('OpenID is a secure way to have one username and password to log into many web sites.  It does not require special software, and it does not share login information to any site with which it is associated.') .'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('Users can create accounts using their OpenID, assign one or more OpenIDs to an existing account, and log in using an OpenID. This lowers the barrier to registration, which is good for the site, and offers convenience and security to the users. Logging in via OpenID is far more secure than the previous method using drupal.module.') .'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('The basic concept is that a user has a login on an OpenID server.  When the user comes to your site, they are presented with the option of entering the URL of their OpenID server.  Your site then communicates with the OpenID server, asking it to verify the identity of the user.  If the user is logged into their OpenID server, the server communicates back to your site, verifying the user.  Otherwise, the user is presented with a login to their OpenID server.  At no point does this site record, or need to record the user\'s OpenID username and password.').'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('More information on OpenID is available at <a href="@url">OpenID.net</a>.', array('@url' => url('http://openid.net'))) .'</p>';
       return $output;
   }
 }