Index: modules/node/node.pages.inc
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RCS file: /cvs/drupal/drupal/modules/node/node.pages.inc,v
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -p -r1.35 node.pages.inc
--- modules/node/node.pages.inc	6 Sep 2008 08:36:20 -0000	1.35
+++ modules/node/node.pages.inc	15 Sep 2008 17:03:48 -0000
@@ -163,9 +163,9 @@ function node_form(&$form_state, $node) 
     );
     $form['revision_information']['log'] = array(
       '#type' => 'textarea',
-      '#title' => t('Log message'),
+      '#title' => t('Revision log message'),
       '#rows' => 2,
-      '#description' => t('An explanation of the additions or updates being made to help other authors understand your motivations.'),
+      '#description' => t('Provide an explanation of the changes you are making. This will help other authors understand your motivations.'),
     );
   }