--- extend-manual-install.txt	2016-11-21 15:53:31.505513166 -0700
+++ source/en/extend-manual-install.txt	2016-11-21 15:47:14.249929034 -0700
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
 ==== Steps
 
 If you are installing a module or theme from _Drupal.org_, follow the
-downloading and unpacking instructions, and then the uploading instructions. If
+downloading instructions, and then the uploading/unpacking instructions. If
 you created the module or theme, skip the downloading and unpacking steps.
 
-===== Downloading and the files
+===== Downloading the files
 
 . Open the module or theme project page on drupal.org; for example, the _Admin
 toolbar_ page (https://www.drupal.org/project/admin_toolbar).
@@ -91,11 +91,9 @@
 . Upload the compressed file to your site. Place it in either the same
 location as the one you deleted (if replacing an existing module or theme)
 or the appropriate subdirectory of _modules_ or _themes_
-(if adding a new module or theme). If you have access via a terminal,
-you may use FTP, SFTP or scp. If you are using an interface like cPanel,
-you will find some type of File Manager utility.
+(if adding a new module or theme).
 
-. Extract the files into a directory on the server. If you have access via
+. Extract the files on the server. If you have access via
 a terminal, you can use a command like
 +
 ----
@@ -131,5 +129,6 @@
 
 *Attributions*
 
-Written by https://www.drupal.org/u/batigolix[Boris Doesborg] and
-https://www.drupal.org/u/jhodgdon[Jennifer Hodgdon].
+Written and edited by https://www.drupal.org/u/batigolix[Boris Doesborg],
+https://www.drupal.org/u/jhodgdon[Jennifer Hodgdon] and
+https://www.drupal.org/u/vegantriathlete[Marc Isaacson].