--- 607028_README_4.txt	2009-10-23 01:08:15.000000000 -0400
+++ 607028_README.txt	2009-10-23 01:17:36.000000000 -0400
@@ -13,25 +13,43 @@ ABOUT DRUPAL
 
 Drupal is an open source content management platform supporting a variety of
 websites ranging from personal weblogs to large community-driven websites. For
-more information, see the Drupal website at http://drupal.org/.
+more information, see the Drupal website at http://drupal.org/, or join the
+Drupal community at http://drupal.org/contribute.
 
 USE AND CONFIGURE YOUR DRUPAL SITE
 ----------------------------------
 
+Drupal ships with a base of common functionality such as managing content or
+user accounts. Additional features are added to Drupal through the use of
+"modules". Drupal ships with several modules to provide additional functionality
+such as image uploading, search, or content translation. More contributed
+modules are available from the Drupal website to enable additional
+functionality.
+
  * To install, upgrade, and maintain Drupal:
    See INSTALL.txt and UPGRADE.txt in the same directory as this document.
  * To create and improve your Drupal site:
    See http://drupal.org/getting-started
- * To join the Drupal community:
-   See http://drupal.org/contribute
+ * Extend core functionality (add "modules") to Drupal:
+   See http://drupal.org/project/modules
+   http://drupal.org/getting-started/5/install-contrib/modules
+ * Place new modules and themes in sites/all/modules and
+   sites/all/themes.
+ * To move beyond the basics of Drupal:
+   See http://drupal.org/handbook/customization
 
 CHANGE THE LOOK AND FEEL OF YOUR DRUPAL SITE
 --------------------------------------------
 
- * New Designs ("themes") for Drupal:
+Drupal contains a theme system to separate the look and feel of a website from
+its functionality or content. By default, Drupal uses the "Garland" theme for
+displaying content to users, and uses the "Seven" theme for the administrative
+interface. To customize Drupal's display further, see the following resources.
+
+ * Download additional themes for Drupal:
    http://drupal.org/project/themes
    http://drupal.org/getting-started/5/install-contrib/themes
- * To change Drupal's appearance and output ("theme"): 
+ * To change Drupal's appearance and output ("theme") with HTML, CSS, or PHP: 
    See http://drupal.org/theme-guide
  * To collaborate with other Drupal themers:
    See http://drupal.org/contribute/themes
@@ -39,17 +57,22 @@ CHANGE THE LOOK AND FEEL OF YOUR DRUPAL 
 WRITE CODE FOR YOUR DRUPAL SITE
 -------------------------------
 
+Drupal contains an extensive API to allow the creation of new modules to extend
+Drupal's core functionality. Nearly any part of Drupal's functionality can be
+modified or overridden by additional modules by implementing Drupal "hooks".
+There are thousands of contributed modules available on the Drupal website.
+Before writing a new module, be sure to search the Drupal website for a module
+which meets your requirements.
+
  * Don't modify core Drupal files ("hack core"):
    See http://drupal.org/node/144376
- * Place new modules and themes in sites/all/modules and
-   sites/all/themes.
- * Extend Core Functionality (add "modules") to Drupal:
-   See http://drupal.org/project/modules
+ * Write modules for Drupal using PHP:
    http://drupal.org/getting-started/5/install-contrib/modules
    http://drupal.org/developing/modules
  * Use Drupal's API and hooks:
    See http://api.drupal.org/
    http://drupal.org/node/326
    See http://api.drupal.org/api/group/hooks/7
- * Hone your skills by helping build Drupal itself:
+ * Contribute to the community by helping build Drupal itself:
    See http://drupal.org/contribute/development
+